Tuesday, May 27, 2014

X-Men - The Retcon of Daesx of Futureous Pasteousix

Ah, here we are.  Back to review another X-Men movie.  It's hard to believe that it's been since July that I've seen the last one.  But here we are.

So what do I think about it?

It's good.

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...Want me to expand upon my thoughts?

Well without spoilers, these are my thoughts -




In a future that is bleak with destruction of everything, Super Sentinels are destroying the last of the mutants.  A small group involving Bishop, Kitty Pride (Shadowcat), Blink, Iceman, and some others, are shown surviving by doing some time jumps to survive the Sentinel attacks.  They are soon met by Xavier, Magneto, Storm, and Logan.
They come to an idea with Kitty's power to send someone back to the 70's and stop the Sentinels from being created to save themselves and others from this future.  Because of the pain and hardships, they send Logan to his past self (before his metal skeleton) to get Xavier and Magneto to work together to stop Mystique from killing Trask (the creator of the Sentinels) and starting a domino effect that will end with a future they will die in.


It is the best X-Men movie out right now.  And it's good because of the previous movies building up characters that we already know.  This is basically the X-men version of Avengers, we already have stories from previous movies that we know of these characters and they are both funny and touching because we know them.  It's a perfect blend of the first movie (which I didn't like too much) and of First Class (which I liked a lot better), with a sprinkle of Wolverine (the second one, which even though I hear people complain about it, I still liked). 
But where this really shines is also the new characters.  Even though Bishop and Blink (the teleporting girl) rarely talk, they do make it interesting enough for you to feel the struggles of the characters.
Not to mention Quicksilver, who steals the movie for like 10 minutes.  But I'll go over him in spoilers.
Other than that, there is the surprising blend of both future and past.  It works as a movie and as a comic book story.  

I also want to point out that for a PG-13 movie... this was pretty violent.  Like people ripping heads off and splitting them in half and melting their faces off...  Yikes.  I mean it was awesome, but man, give some warning there, even though there wasn't any blood, it was still violent.

The moral of the story is also pretty nice.  It's a feeling that people can change if helped by choices. 

Other than that, the action is really good and amazing graphics.

But what's my problem?  Well...

It has nitpicks that bug me.

Now don't get me wrong, I will recommend to go see this movie, because it IS AMAZING!  But I can see the problems and it's just gnawing at me.
I don't know... I can't explain without spoilers.



SENTINEL DOES NOT APPROVE!  YOU MUST EXPLAIN!




...Don't give me that look.  Alright, now for spoilers-


~~~ Spoilers Below ~~~

I have to say that the fight scene with Blink in it was awesome.  The whole time I was thinking, "NOW YOU'RE FIGHTING WITH PORTALS!"  and enjoyed it.
But we also get to the first nitpick... Kitty Pride sending people back in time.
...Why?  How does someone who can phase through matter send people back in time?  Besides never getting an explanation, why Kitty? I mean, I can see Rouge getting it from another mutant, or Xavier mastering his technique to expand his mental powers to send someone back in time... Like he did in Wolverine and the X-Men. That's what I was expecting.... but Kitty?  Not a good choice.


We go back in time, get a funny scene with the 70's Logan, and go back to the Mutant School to see a walking powerless Xavier...
What?
Now, it is explained better in the movie that it's a walking medicine that suppresses his powers... but still, it's kinda an elephant in the room.  It feels out of place, and only an excuse to show a struggling Xavier.
I wasn't happy with the Beast's effect in First Class, and it is still used in this... but I allowed it because the other scenes were just jaw dropping.
Mystique's scenes were intense and touching, while Magneto's scene's were threatening and unexpected.  

And then we get to Peter.
 

Quicksilver, or as I know him to be Pietro Maximoff, steals the movie with just a few scenes.  The above scene is easily one of the best scenes in the movie.  I'm going to watch that part over and over again when I can.
I did groan at the scene where he talks to Magneto.  "My mom knew a guy who could do that..."
Sigh... to those who don't know, it's a funny joke.
To the comic guys... that's a slap in the face.  I don't know if that was a hint or not, but just *groan*.

But Evan Peters did a great job.  Energetic and he just captured the character.
I'm curious to see how Aaron Talyor-Johnson (that KickAss guy) will do in Avengers 2... but I don't think he will pull it off as well as Peters did.

And then we go to the other Peter, Peter Dinklage as Bolivar Trask (who I swear has died in every comic variation).  He pulls off a good acting performance, and even someone who is thinking he is doing the right thing... but it's underplayed.
And that's mostly because of Fassbender's Magneto.
Who is a giant dick.
... no pun intended.

Now, I've had a problem with every incarnation with Magneto's powers in EVERY movie.  Even the first movie where he uses his powers to pull away every gun and aim it at people.  But this movie takes the cake, with him taking steel railways and shredding them into wire to implant and reprogram the Sentinels.
Just... sigh.  What?  I allow the X2 liquid metal blood, but this is...
Sigh... it was still awesome though.
But man, what a dick.  I mean, I understand they needed him to talk to Mystique, but as soon as he could he's like "Nope, I see a chance for world domination, screw the future!"
Sigh... but that's Magneto for you.

The movie ends well.  I was happy with the ending and won't spoil that part.

But I will say 2 other things.

1. Another problem is that with all the changes, they have Retcon the shit out of the other movies.  That's kinda a good thing.  I'm happy that fixes some things from the 3rd Movie that really bugged me.  But it also leads me to my main problem...
What the hell happened then?  Wolverine loses all his new memories, he can only remember the past ones that no longer exist, and what happened?  Did Phoenix happen?  Did the first movie?  What happened?!
Will we ever know?

2.  The last scene at the end.  That's what I've been waiting for years to see.  My favorite mutant badguy-

The first mutant, and the most powerful one. 
Apocalypse has total control over the molecules of his body, enabling him to alter his form as it suits him, such as allowing his body to become extremely malleable and flexible or change its size, enhance his physical abilities, transform his limbs into weapons, wings, or jets, regenerate from fatal injuries, adapt his body to apparently any disease or hostile environment, and give himself virtually any physical superhuman power. The character is also able to project and absorb energy, and has displayed telepathy and telekinesis. Apocalypse is as well capable of technopathy, able to directly interface with the various technologies he has at his disposal.
However immortal they say Wolverine is, is nothing compared to Apocalypse, who is well over 5000 years old.

I should also point out that his blood can heal mutants.
And he uses it to make his Horsemen, his 4 generals of his control.  Each variation of the Horsemen are a different mutant, (From Magneto, Xavier, Mystique, Cyclops, Storm, and even Hulk), but I can also see him using his powers to resurrect fallen mutants.  Think about it.  Someone awakens him in a government facility that is studying mutants and their corpses, and then Apocalypse is found, awakens the corpses as his new Horsemen, and then absorbs the technology into himself.
I wrote it here first.  Note that now
   

You can see more below for his origin if you need to be caught up. 




Other than that, I have a hard time not recommending this to people.
It is the best X-Men movie out now, and I did like it a lot...

But the major complaint I have is this-

They didn't have Space Age Plastic in the 70's to prevent Magneto from using his powers...
I don't care if they just tried to blow that away with a simple explanation, it didn't happen, they wouldn't have known.
SO SENTINEL!  You shouldn't have been created.
No excuse.

Later~ 
Will

Tuesday, May 20, 2014

Amazing Spider-Man 2 VS... Spiderman?

Went to go see Amazing Spider-Man 2 in 3D and I recommend seeing it.
Why? Because it was actually...

Wait... what's this I'm hearing?  Critics are mixed on it?  AGAIN?
Well, let me put in my 2 cents.

Before I go into the movie, let me tell you my history with the Spider-Man series-

I had to be less than 6 years old when I found out about Spider-Man.  I had just started to read and started to read (or at least look at) the comics in the Sunday newspaper.  I can even remember getting the magazines and reading other stories.

In 1994, when I was 8, the Spider-Man T.V. show started.
Now, I never fully read a Spiderman comic (besides the newspaper ones), but I learned from watching this show.  
To me, C.D. Barnes being the voice of Spider-Man was how I saw the character
I continued watching all the way up to Spider-Man Unlimited but that's when I started to stop watching Saturday Cartoons...

Until Spider-Man was announced for the movies-


 
I was so excited to see this live action and BE ACTION!  And what villain will be in it?  Will it be Doc Ock (which was my favorite) or the Lizard (which was the first villain I saw Spidey fight)?

And it was the Green Goblin...
*pause*  Why?
In the animated series, it wasn't until the 3rd Season before you even see him.  The Hobgoblin was more prominent than the Green Goblin, so why chose him?
Later I found out the history and everything, but still I couldn't get over them using GG as the first Spider-man movie villain.

And as good as people said Spider-Man was, I didn't.  I wasn't happy with it.  The fights were dulled and the action just didn't feel active.  It felt like a Bat-Man 60's movie, not a Spider-Man movie.
And the webs.  How could you fuck up the webs?  Organic Webs?  But the web shooters were classic and made sense...  Spiders don't shoot webs from their hands!
And don't get me started with Tobey Maguire.  I don't care what people said about how geeky he is or was, that WASN'T SPIDERMAN!  It wasn't the smart mouthing, wise cracking superhero I knew and admired.
So I was disappointed by it, and just pushed it away.
Also, because of 9/11 it became a sore thing to talk about...


Until I saw the trailer for Spider-Man 2 and then I was hyped again.



And it was glorious.
I don't care what people say about Alfred Molina, that was an amazing performance from him.  And the effects and fights... it was great.
Once again, I didn't like Toby and I didn't like the struggle of him losing his powers and everything, but it did help with him finding a reason to fight for... I didn't like it, but it helped with the story.  So I was excited about the next one!






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We all know what happened after that.
The good points of that movie were anything dealing with Sandman (which was another odd choice for a movie villain, but I was surprisingly wrong cause it was strong choice).
But the bad points...  how should I put this...
  1.   Harry getting amnesia and forgetting hunting down Peter.  And then the whole B.S. about him breaking up MJ...
  2.   Which leads to MJ causing drama pointlessly and which all of that could have been avoided if they actually acted like a couple, which they DIDN'T.
  3.   Toby/Peter acting badly when affected by the Suit.  
  4.   PETER ACTING BADLY WHEN DANCING.
  5.   Harry acting like a whiny bitch.
  6.   Venom forced in.  And it wasn't worth it... 
I could go on, but that was enough of a reason to be pissed at this movie.  Later, I found out about the pressure Sam Raimi was dealing with him not wanting to put Venom in it, that he had a specific pace he wanted to go with, but pressure from fans and other "people" made him make changes that he didn't want to make.  SO he just went, "Fuck it, lets do it your way."  And it was a mess.


Years pass, and the effects from the 3rd movie had been making all fans worried... the talks of the 4th movie being made was talked and talked about...

Then five years passed and 2012 came.
And even though I/we were skeptic, we took a look at Amazing Spider-Man.

And THAT is what I was waiting for 10 years ago!

I loved it!  I told everyone to go see this movie!  Even with the Batman movies taking a serious approach to the mythology of heroes and duty, Spider-Man was a fun, emotional, and felt very much like the old comics.  Andrew Garfield was likable, geeky, athletic, and smart mouthing... HE IS SPIDERMAN!  Helping kids, being inspirational to people, helping others! Granted, not an all that good at being Peter Parker, but I like him as Spiderman.  And Gwen (Oh my God, Emma Stone) was pitch perfect.  She was interesting, intelligent, and helpful!  And it felt...
It felt like something I would be watching for a while.
Granted it was comic book logic and kinda silly, but the fighting... it was Spider-Man fighting. 
I really liked it.


And now we get to Amazing Spider-Man 2, and I knew that (  Gwen was going to die ) .  I didn't want to go see this movie because I really liked her character.  But I kept hearing people talk about other things about the movie, so I knew I had to go see it...

My opinion is this -

Go see this movie. 

BUT! 

Listen to my warning.  Don't expect a fight scene with Rhino.  Don't let Harry's attitude pull you out of the movie.  And see it in 3D. 

 
After this, I will go into spoiler territory. -





The Spider-Man fights are really well done.  Whatever problem people have with the Superman movie, it is the opposite with this one.  HE SAVES EVERYONE (except for one...) and he acts like you expect for Spider-Man to act.  Great web shooting tricks, and great comedy with it. 
Electro, before he transforms, is kinda cliche nerd, but it is showing someone who is so sheltered that he hides his anger and doesn't do anything... Until he gains power.  I see this as a great psychological view on giving power to the powerless, the old saying of the corruption of people with absolute power.  BECAUSE THAT IS WHAT HE GETS!  I mean, wow, the electric powers in this movie are amazing.  Great effects. 
I do find it weird that he basically becomes Dr. Manhattan... but I let it slide.
More importantly, where did he get his costume?
Harry Osborne... is weird.  And I mean that as he seems really selfish and not very smart.  I didn't like him, but I don't like his character in the comics anyway.  He seemed a little forced.
And Gwen...
Sigh...
Gwen is still a strong character.  And a strong presence.  She gives a speech that is as powerful as the "With Great Power" one.  And it's good.

Other than that, I know some people complain about the fact with 3 villains that the story isn't strong.  But I disagree.  The story is mostly Spider-Man's, dealing with new villains, the guilt of Gwen's dad (which was kinda awkward seeing Leery appearing in the movie), Gwen leaving, and new information about his father. 

But to the people who say this is the worst movie... you haven't seen shit.

Later~
Will

Sunday, May 11, 2014

Burt Wonderstone Vs. 47 Ronin Vs. World War Z

So as I was working on Part 5 of my short story last week, I was able to watch three movies that I hadn't seen before.

...and I wasn't really blown away by them.  Except for...

But I'll do some quick reviews of it.  Because maybe there is a gem in this bunch.
The first is -





I've been a fan of magic for quite some time in my life.  My favorite magicians are Penn and Teller (which was my first show in Las Vegas), and some of there tricks are just... hehehe.  

This movie is more of a spoof of magicians, like Sigfried and Roy vs. David Blane.  And it's... eh?

I am not a fan of Steve Carell.  Or more correctly, I am not a fan of him in the office, and this is pretty much him in this movie.  I did like the parody of Jim Carrey, making fun of Chris Angel (which I also saw in Vegas) and street magic, but it got pretty transparent really quickly as he was just used as a cliche rival character.  And poor Steve Buscemi, I remember the trailers for this movie and he was just written out pretty much without much effect to the plot.  You can tell that the story was worked on multiple times though... and it wasn't that strong.  I don't understand Steve's ego and the fact that he had been doing the same tricks for 10 years but didn't change anything?  That's magician code breaking!  You need to keep studying, do NEW tricks, keep trying different ways of doing it!  This is probably why I like Teller's tricks the best.
(David Copperfield and his team do a trick in the movie, and it's decent)

However, I did like Alan Arkin in this.  His tricks were the only ones that made me think, "Now that's more like it!  I want to see more of that!"  But, his was also kinda squeezed in as a cliche mentor.

Overall, this movie was underwhelming. 


But as underwhelming, at least it wasn't as awkward as...



Where do I even start...

SO you take a historical story and put magic and demons in it...
FAIL!
Well that didn't take long.

The fighting in this movie is good, and I would recommend it for that alone, because everything else is crap.

And before I go to far, I will say that Keanu Reeves isn't that bad in this... it's just that he feels out of place in this narrative.  And that's the problem with this movie, the narrative is fucked up.  I suppose it was trying for a more fanatical approach in a way like the story telling ways of the Japanese...  but it didn't work.
Not to mention the love story was... out of place.
This whole movie made me feel unclean.

So would this last movie put the final nail in my coffin lid of not so good movies?




I went in expecting the worse with this movie.  As soon as I heard of it's PG-13 rating, I thought "How could they fuck up a zombie movie like that?  NO blood or gore... this won't be a zombie movie."

And it turned out... they didn't need to.  It actually kinda worked.
It was like the "Abridged Zombie Apocalypse", anything that had a zombie movie made of was in this movie.  It followed rules like in the Zombie Guide book (which I have, I didn't read the World War Z book though but I also heard it was nothing like the movie), and it actually was still pretty intense.  It produced logic ways of fighting and surviving and I enjoy it.

Oh, and the Marines were bad ass.

The only scene I can say that bugged me was the sudden "accidental shooting" that everyone who has seen it knows what I am talking about.  I guess it was suppose to be realistic and saying "be prepared for anything and shit happens", but it felt out of place for the plot flow. 
Other than that, it's actually worth a watch.  And you can watch it with a squeamish spouse who doesn't like gore and they might like it also.



Next time, I tackle the dreaded Amazing Spiderman 2, another one of those mixed reviewed movies, and throw my two cents at it.  Will it be as good as the first one (like Captain America 2 and Thor 2) or does it fail heavily (like Dark Knight Rises and Iron Man 3).  My eyes will be the judge.

~Later

Monday, May 5, 2014

Shades of Fear ~ 5 - Recognition

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     “So who was this Shadow King?” asked Tusk. 
     Among the sharp red rocks and curved cliff caverns, there was a fire pit that the group of hunters had hunkered down in to rest for a bit.   On one side, Captain was laying down with his hands behind his head and looking up into the smokey sky through a hole in the rocky cavern, calmly trying to see what stars would appear behind the orange and grey clouds.  On the other, Doc Jay was cleaning and stitching a bite wound on Tusk, who was eating the leg of the recently defeated monster and talking to Brant, who after cooking the monster that was now being eaten, was cleaning his tools.  
     It wasn't even an hour ago when Captain watched Tusk jump on the back of a twelve foot scaly horse and beat it's brains out of with a hammer, but after shooting it in the seven of its thirteen eyes and finding out that it's legs could withstand the impact of a forty pound sledge weapon, there was very little options.  Captain only hit four of the eyes, much to his disappointment, and watched as the monster wrenched back from the impacts from Tusk, bit into his shoulder, and threw him across the rocks.  This only seemed to excite Tusk, who rushed back and tried to finished the creature off with only his hammer.  
     But unfortunate, it excited him too much.
     Now, with his shirt torn revealing his olive slick skin with oddly shaped muscle covered in blood, Tusk could hardly remember who the crew was.  It was the side affect of being a Warrior, whenever he went berserk he would lose parts of his memory.  Sometimes it was for just a little bit, but other times... 
     Brant said, "Is." 
     A few seconds passed before Tusk replied.  "What?"
     Brant stayed quiet as he continued cleaning.  He didn't talk much, but when or if he did, it wasn't for very long.  Captain sighed and closed his eyes, trying to ignore the conversation. 
     Doc, trying to stitch with Tusk ignoring him, responded.  "Is, not was."
     “Aw, sorry, who is this Shadow King? I mean, I remember the children stories, but what did he rule?"
     Captain responded without opening his eyes, "Everything and nothing.  What are you asking, Tusk?"
     “Well, I was thinking…”
     Doc added quickly in a low tone, "Never a good sign.”
     Tusk either didn't hear or ignored it.  “…that as much as I hear people talk about the Shadow King, I have never seen him.  How do we even know he was… is real?”
     Damn, thought Captain.  How hard did that creature throw him?  Not even an hour ago, he saw this man jump on the back of a creature with a hand hammer and laughing like a mad man as he started smashing it's face, but now he was just giving this blank expression and asking questions that a child would ask.  Captain spoke out, “I’m guessing you never gone into Pride Castle before, have you?”
     “What, just walk in?  Wouldn’t someone…”
     Doc pulled on the suture with some strength, but it didn't affect the large body of Tusk.  “It’s abandoned.  Keep still.”
      Tusk seemed to just notice that Doc was working on him, but took another bite from his food before he slowly asked, “…Why?”  Captain wasn't a hundred percent sure if he was asking about the castle or keeping still.
      Doc asked without looking up from his work.  “Did you get hit on that head as well by that monster or you being intentionally dense?”
      There was another pause before Tusk answered, “…No?”
      Captain spoke.  "To be fair, most people feel that way about Pride Castle.  Even though no one is guarding it, no one wants to enter inside and see the last battleground of the Burning Man and the Shadow King.  The scorch marks can be seen everywhere, from floor to the ceiling... But still on his throne, is the remains of the Shadow King."
     Tusk thought for a bit, and then responded, "So, he's dead?"
     "Yes and no... in truth, no one knows.  The armor of the Shadow King still sits on the throne, but no one has had the guts to go up to it and check what's inside.  It feels as bad as walking into a tomb without knowing if the inhabitants were dead or not."
     "Cowards."  Brant said, who had finished cleaning his cooking tools and was now cleaning his personal mini chain gun.
     Captain shook his head.  "I don't think so.  I think it has something to do with..."
     "Pride."
     Captain turned to see Salric walk down the side of the rocky hill, wrapped in black strips of leather and carrying a rifle that was as long as he was.  He continued speaking, "It's pride that prevents people from going in.  Would you really want to be the person who would go see if the Shadow King was dead?"
      Tusk, after another pause, replied, "I guess not?"
      Salric ignored Tusk said, "Your turn, Brant."
      "Right."  Brant put down his tools and grabbed his chain gun, and started to climb up the hill to guard for more monsters.
      Salric sat down close to the fire, and removed his upper face bandages to reveal an ashen, short haired male face with sunken black eyes.  If you could imagine a person who looked liked he hadn't sleep for a month, he would look energetic compared to Salric.  He grabbed a small piece of meat that was leftover from the kill and took an even smaller bite through the black straps on his mouth.  He chewed but didn't swallow as he looked over to Doc and asked, "How's he doing?"
     Doc huffed, "It's just a flesh wound, don't worry about it.  It's not as bad as this some of the people I stitched back up at the Arena.”
     Tusk turned to look at Doc directly, “You worked at the Arena as well, old man?”
     So, thought Captain, he can remember the Coliseum still.  Maybe certain memories stay with a person...  
     Doc turned him back and continued stitching,  “Yeah, I worked there.  There were some rough people there, a never-ending amount of them actually.”
     “I never saw you there when I was fighting.  When did you leave?”
     “Right after the Dead Man came in and broke thirty of the Coliseum’s best Warriors in one fight.”
     Tusk eyes widened, “You’ve seen the Dead Man?!  What’s he like?”
     Doc shrugged, but continued stitching.  “Pretty much just bones and metal.  All the stories you hear about him look like they are true.”
     "Except for the drinking,"  said Salric, taking another miniscule bite.
     Captain added, "And the moping.  We've met him too."
     Tusk surprised was evident.  “Even you two have seen him?  Fuck."  He cursed some more, and then started to wonder.  "Now there is someone I would like to fight once, or even see him fight.  Must have been a blood bath then at the arena.” Tusk smiled.
     Captain always felt uncomfortable when Tusk smiled.   Just like Captain and most people, Tusk lost his memory when the Burning Man came, but unlike everyone else, Tusk never found anyone who recognized him.  He took the name Tusk Smith because of the hammer he had with him and the large bottom fangs that grew from his jaw.  Every time he smiled, his tusk like teeth gave an impression that he was going to eat something or someone soon.
     Tusk continued, “Maybe even the worse thing you have seen.”
     Doc's needle paused.  "No, not the worst."
     This caught Captain's attention away from Tusk's smile.  "You witnessed one of the craziest fights ever known in the Silver City, and you're saying you saw worse?"
     After tying off a thread and cutting it off the needle, Doc looked at everyone and sighed.  "About six months after I started working as an healer for the Coliseum, there was this kid who started fighting there. 
     "Now, back then, you didn’t have a choice in the matter of when you could fight and if you wanted to get out.  Back then, it was known as a kill or be killed time…  At least, that’s how things were shown to the crowd.  The owner had a private Angel leaf garden that he used on slaves and Warriors so that they could have serious injuries and be healed like new in a few seconds.  Basically, people were brought to the brink of death and when the crowd left, I would take their bodies and instantly heal them.  It also allowed them to go full powered without fear of death.  The crowd loved those raw frantic fights, thinking that they were watching a new death sport every time.  The owner was getting a ton of money off this, and I got paid as well… but I didn’t feel good about the slaves. 
     "Warriors, like Bruno over here," he pointed to Tusk, "enjoyed fighting, but slaves were brought in as cannon fodder.  Most didn’t make it pass the month, while others turned into monsters themselves.  But this kid…" Captain noticed that Doc was hesitating every time he tried to think about that kid and wondered why, but waited for him to continue. 
      "I don’t know what he was.  He was brought in a slave but he never acted like it.  He got beaten up so many times that they started to call him the ‘Punching Bag’ or ‘Training Dummy’.  The kid wasn’t exactly the brightest person I had ever met, but he had a good heart.  Almost got beheaded in one fight to protect this new girl slave that came in, I had to stitch his neck back together before I could use the leafs on him.  But he just kept on smiling, like it was just another day.
     "Anyway, after some time, he got better at fighting, and he became top winner more than once.  He was getting cocky and powerful… and some of the Warriors didn’t like that.  Now, I found out about this later after the whole ordeal happened, but someone poisoned the kid with Demonbane."
     Captain interrupted, "Demonbane?"
     "It’s a painkiller, the black residue of the Angel leaf.  It’s usually used with small doses to the tongue to create a pain free experience that gives the user a ‘world escaping’ high, so it’s also highly addictive.  However, its side effects usually involve limbs becoming permanently numb and falling off and it’s so powerful that it can kill anyone with blood contact.  So only the foolish or desperate try it.  Well, the kid was a chain smoker and someone had rolled a leaf into one of them and he smoked it… right before going out to fight in another blood sport. 
     "I didn’t see the match, though I heard it was brutal, but I had never seen anyone so fucked up before in my life.  Not counting the multiple stab wounds in his back and chest, the broken bones, and bloody coughs…"  Doc closed his eyes and started to rub them.  "The worst thing I can remember, as I tried to stitch his stomach and chest back up and use all the leafs I could… It was the screams.  He was burning from the inside, his blood turning to dust.  After hours, as his screams died out and his blood started to boil away, he kept coughing up more blood and bile…"
     Doc stopped, and everyone was completely silent, except for the cracking and popping of the fire.  Captain and Salric gave each other a dark look, while Tusk had a confused look.  After awhile, Doc spoke up again.  "I tried to watch over him as he lay dying.  He struggled, but I knew he wouldn’t make it.  How could he?  But he tried… That’s what made it worse."
    Captain had heard of doctors being traumatized after so many battles, but he would never have imagine this from Doc Jay.  He had seen him take a freshly cut arm and attach it back without a hint of sweat.  But for this to effect him like that...
     Something he heard Doc said had bugged him.  He was burning from the inside?  That sounded like...
     Captain's train of thought was interrupted by Tusk bluntly asking, "So why is it called Demonbane?" Captain and Salric both failed to hold back their groans.  Doc opened his eyes again with a tired look and then slapped Tusk's sore muscle, causing him to twitch in pain. 
     "It’s slang from the Traders.  They say it’s like it kills the demons in you, and the name just stuck to it.  Now, shut up and let me finish."  Doc grabbed a rag from his bag, which smelled like strong alcohol, and he dabbed it on Tusk's arm.
     Tusk had the look of someone who knew he asked the wrong question, but didn't wait for long before he said, "Sorry I asked...  So, Captain, where did you meet the Dead Man?"
     One track mind, thought Captain.  Simple and straightforward.
     "We met him on the Black Road."
     The silence from previous seemed loud compared to the response from that answer.  Even the fire seemed quiet for a few seconds.  
     Tusk seemed unconcerned about this.  "What, the road in the Shadow Lands?  What about it?"
     "Drop it, Tusk." Salric said.
     Tusk looked at both Salric and Captain, but that seemed to spur him on more, "I don't understand your hesitation, Captain.  You've been through Hell and back more times than I can count on my fingers and toes.  But as soon as you or Salric bring up The Black Road, you all get really quiet and try to avoid the subject.  What's so bad about that place?"
     "Seriously, Tusk, drop it now."  Salric said again.
     Captain slowly brushed off the dust on his pants and got up.  He strode in front of Tusk, and said right into his face, "You really want to know?"
     Tusk didn't hesitate, "Yeah."
     "Then get up."
     As Tusk stood up, towering easily over Captain, he grabbed his hammer and followed Captain to an open area.
     Captain had asked him once about his hammer, why did he always carry it?  The response he got was, 'What hammer?' and he left it at that.  He was just glad that he broke his large sledge hammer, which Tusk called Finisher Six, on that last monster.  It was going to be hard enough just trying to get this to work cleanly without him swinging a anvil on a stick around.
     Captain checked his revolver, and told Tusk,  "Alright, I'm going to attack you and I want you to defend yourself.  Simple enough, right?"
     Tusk nodded and started to smile.  He enjoyed fights like this all to well in training.
     "We'll turn around and count to five, then we'll start."
     This was new to Tusk.  Usually you always faced the opponent before you fought each other.  It was a weakness and usually not a smart move.  But the look of Captain's face didn't let him argue.  He turned and waited.  As Captain turned, he gave a look to Salric, who just gave him a silent nod.
     Captain thought to himself, I don't know if this would stick with him if he starts to transform again, but I know for sure that it would stick with me, and that will have to be good enough.     
     "One," shouted Captain.
     Tusk could figure out what was going to happen, he would have to dodge as soon as he turned to get away from Captain's aim.  Then rush to his side and try and take him out before he could counter.
     "Two."
     Or maybe Captain was expecting that.  I could try ducking and then rushing at his legs.
     "Three."
     But maybe I should face him first and then throw myself at his hand and knocking his revolver out so that I could just...
     "Four."
     Fuck it, I'll just wing it as usual, thought Tusk in a agreeable tone.
     "Five!" yelled Captain. 
     Tusk turned, hammer in hand and...
     Captain, with his revolver still holstered, was still facing his back to Tusk.  His arms were outreached to his sides, and he wasn't moving.  Tusk, briefly paused and then asked, "What are you doing?"
     Captain stayed silent, his back still turned.
     "Is this a joke?"  Tusk, getting upset, started to raise his voice.  "Face me!"
     Captain didn't move.
     Tusk started to feel humiliated.  He never cared when people tried to make fun of him when he asked questions or talked, but on the battle field it was different.  His anger grew and so did his body, he started to growl and took a step forward...
     A shot fired and a hot wind blew across Tusk's face.  He turned to see Salric on the side of the open area, his rifle pointing a little ways from the field.  Salric simply pointed his finger, and Tusk followed to where Captain was.
     But Captain wasn't there.  He was behind Tusk, tripping his legs out from underneath. There was a brief blur as Tusk head hit the ground and the next thing he knew he was staring into the barrel of Captain's revolver.
     Tusk froze, and accepted defeat.  He had no right to say that it was cheating.  On the battlefield, anything goes, expect everything or you are dead.  
     Captain spoke in a calm and simple tone, "When you fight, Tusk, you always look prepared. You can see where you place your feet and where your weapon is.  You can see who you are fighting and can see their weaknesses.  But on the Black Road, it would be as if they never moved, no openings, no warnings, no time to defend.  You would be dead before you even blinked.  That's why we are scared." 
      Tusk looked nervous at first, but as Captain kept talking, another smile started to show.  It wasn't the creepy smile that Captain disliked, but a different smile.  One of acceptance, and joy.  He was excited. 
      "Sounds like a challenge, sir."  Tusk said.
      Captain continued.  "Have you heard about the stages of fear?"
      "No, sir."
      "That's ok, because it doesn't really exist.  There are no stages, just different shades.  We are all scared of something and it's just a small variation of basic fear.  But on the Black Road, you feel all of it. And either you accept that, or it will destroy you." 
      Tusk started to smile again, but as he noticed the look on Captain's face, and just nodded instead.
      "Yes, sir."
      "Did you understand all of that?"
      "Quite clear, sir."
      "Good."  Captain holstered his revolver and outstretched his hand.
      Tusk looked at it and then grabbed it.  He asked, "Er... sir, can I ask one more question?"
     "Yes, Tusk?" 
     "Who the hell are y'all, anyway?"
     Captain sighed.  Here we go again.
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     "Are you alright, Captain?" asked Salric.
     Captain shook his head and saw that he was in front of his group again.  Metal soldiers were in front of him, carrying the black box with a hole in it.  He could remember looking into it and then...
     It was a memory.  Six month's ago.  How things had changed since then.  Was that some sort of flashback?  It so so clear, but it felt like something was picking through it...
     "Captain?"
     "Did you see that?"
     "See what?"
     Captain looked around and recognized worry in Salric and the groups faces.  He then shook his head again and said, "Never mind, lets get this done with."



End of Part 5 ~
I can't believe how long I had left this alone.  I guess it had to do with me moving to my own place and then... life.  Things happen, and they have been happening in a large amount to me lately.  But I now have the characters fleshed out and next time it will continue with the main story.... but this is important for now.
It will all connect later.  And I'll edit later as well.
Later~

Also, because this was so long ago, here are the other parts -
Part 1 - Unease
Part 2 - Disbelief
Part 3 - Bargaining
Part 4 - Paralyze